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dying_inside6
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Tue Apr 15, 2008 @ 01:02pm

OMG that is like amazing!!! is there going to be more to it or is that all?

Kuroyuki Soru
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Tue Apr 15, 2008 @ 01:03pm

heart Theres gonna be more ^^

MattDaEliteGamer
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Wed Apr 16, 2008 @ 12:29am

Kuroyuki!
This is pure GENIUS!
o______________o
- amazed -
Your RPing skills are....OUTSTANDING!
WOW!
XD

I am not Kira
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Wed Apr 16, 2008 @ 01:56am

I'll make you trust me...

Here I am, commenting your journal.
Your little excerpt was good. It was a bit rushed, though.
And you should definitely add more of Kuroyuki's thoughts as she experiences the scene before her.
Also, perhaps you should use Kuro's name more often, as well as "she".
But still, it was a nice read.
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And when you've told me everything I need to know...

I'll kill you.

Shinigami Choppu
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Wed Apr 16, 2008 @ 02:05am

A very good read, it added amusement to my day.
(AKA Yes I like it, I love it actaully ^__^)

Taizel Dramira
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Wed Apr 16, 2008 @ 02:14am

That was cool. I wish I'd get the hang of being literate...>_<;

Jagged Fangs
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Wed Apr 16, 2008 @ 02:33am

Interesting, to say the least.
It seems like a good decision to continue, as It would definitely provide one with a good read.

Taizel Dramira
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Thu Apr 17, 2008 @ 12:01am

I think it was awesome. I still struggle for complete literacy >_<

MattDaEliteGamer
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Thu Apr 17, 2008 @ 12:19am

Your stories are amazing.
I could never be as literate as you.
You put so much detailing into your stories it's like i can visualize it in my mind!
It's truly remarkable how you can write such awesome stories! >.o

-I- Cyvus -I-
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Thu Apr 17, 2008 @ 12:34am

How beautiful!! You have very good story skills~ heart

Lord Lucifer Cuts
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Thu Apr 17, 2008 @ 01:47am

Twas Pretty Good.

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