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Especially when I'm working slowly. Because it's getting to the point where I'm too lazy to type up the whole story, not even in parts. Even if I just finish up this little part and leave it hanging, it's still a little long. And I admit, I haven't done the greatest job with my writing. It's got the same old problem. I don't normally write stories that involve any kind of romance for a reason stare I can't move the story along, as I have no clue how to get from the beginning to the middle. Hence, I've just decided to leave it as a cliffhanger ^_^ I don't like not doing my best on stories. And I don't feel like typing it crying And everything I've written over the last few days is crud. I feel like taking out the little bit of plot between the psychological analyses of the characters. Not all of the plot. I'll leave the spoken part 'cause that's important...and actually, that makes more sense. And just take out Gabby's little thing. Yea...that makes more sense.
Um...but I can't really post it here sweatdrop Understandably. It's totally PG, but strangeness makes posting it a bad idea whee
Well, there's anime manga club to go to, so bye bye ^_^
~nepie
omg, Annette just made my day! ^_^ Well, you gotta expect that if I see an album labelled "Lukumi Babalu Aye" I'm gonna go investigate, since we did have that theme. And I was sad that it wasn't my class, but however...I was bored and started idly sketching, and it looked like the picture! So, I kept at it, and it's pretty good ^_^ Minus the background, which I don't feel like doing...at least not now. But, anyway, I really need to get this out of my system:
KYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!
M'kay, I'm good ^_^ I've never done such a good job, and now I wish I had a scanner so I could show it off mrgreen *ish very proud*
^^
Okay, I need to freaking get a life xd Don't let me near a computer.
I seriously do need a life, though. I've got to get my head out of the clouds.
No I don't. It's all good in the clouds.
Except I'm being blinded by all the hopefulness.
Perhaps. But maybe that's not quite true.
And I f-ing have to do Delgado's paper 'cause she (well, okay, my lazy-a** classmates and other classes) moved the due date to next Monday, and I'M NOT FREAKING GOING TO BE IN SCHOOL!!!!!! So, i have to do that this week, my speculative essay, ANOTHER submission (dear God, I'm drawing a blank here), and I'm about to lose my mind crying Because I can tell I'm starting to get really obssessive again, and it's taking a lot of my patience to not get so bad as I did before.
Hence, do not give me a computer 3nodding
Wow, I'm apparently very bored xd I'm always bored, what's new whee And Classic won't start up, so I can't play my puzzle games. *sigh* People always IM me right in the middle of the most fantastic runs on 3Towers. Which is why I like to play it whee My friends have the most amazing timing! So does mama, but that's a whole nother story rolleyes
I swear, it's 97% done loading crying And won't finish. Grr...the ennui grows greater as the night grows later, but as the night grows later, the online grow fewer. And the ennui grows greater as the online grow fewer, since the online grow fewer as the night grows later and the ennui grows greater as the night grows later. xd And that is very random, but very true.
Stay away from toxic waste
Speed away with all due haste
Run until it's far behind
No backward glances of any kind
Oh my, now I'm rhyming. Give me a few days, and I'll be composing sonnets in my sleep, likely as not xd I did write the most interesting poetry in the 2nd half of freshmen year. It was all lame sophmore year, but I was crying too often, I think. Frightened, frightened of the day they told me she was gone away, that school would never be the same, that I'd never hear my name ever again. Argh, I'm rhyming without thinking about it mad And last year was no year for poetry. I was flipping out. I was worrying.
Anyway, what's really annoying is that Classic is STILL not started up! wth? Hello. Did something happen to the system folder? Hmm...this is worth investigation, but I'm way too lazy. ANd I'm just typing, typing typing. Hey, I know, I can type a little more of the story. Pretty much up to the part where it gets strange, I guess. Umm...I'll put the little bit right before where I stopped before. Lemme find it...
"Oh. Thanks." Her expression softened as she took the ribbon from Gabrielle's hand, her fingertips brushing Gabrielle's. She tied the ribbon back around her hair, staring at the floor all the while. When she finished, she looked up at Gabrielle. They looked at each other for a long moment. ((um...wow, I didn't remember the fingertips thing. That's either really silly or good foreshadowing...idk which xd ))
"You know," Sofia said quietly, "all I ever wanted was for us to be friends. I like you well enough, but you never seemed to want me around. I tried to be nice to you, but you always pushed me away." She looked sadly at her feet.
"I annoy you. You hate me."
"I don't hate you, Sofia," Gabrielle said. "Everything's been so hectic and stressful. I'm here, my boyfriend's on the other side of the country, and my family's 200 miles away. I've been lashing out at you and pushing you away because I'm frustrated and alone. You don't deserve it. I shouldn't have taken it out on you. I'm so sorry." She paused. "Will...Can you forgive me?" Sofia gazed at her for a moment, considering her words.
"Of course I forgive you. It's all behind us now. I do hope, though," Sofia said softly, "that you can forgive my annoying behavior. I could tell you were stressed, and I didn't back off. I'm sorry." ((something needs to go here; I'm just not sure what))
"Consider it completely in the past." ((heheh, I do tend to steal people's phrases irl. As you'll see in a few lines))
"So, Gabrielle, um..." Sofia hesitated. "Can I stay?" Gabrielle smiled at her.
"Of course." Sofia's eyes lit up.
"Really?" (( xd ))
"Yeah."
"Oh, thank you, Gabrielle!"
"Call me Gabby."
"What? Really?" (( xd xd ))
"Yeah."
"Thank you so much, Gabby!" Sofia rushed forward and gave Gabby a huge hug. Gabby patted her awkwardly on the back.
"it's nothing, really." Sofia stepped back and fixed Gabby's brown eyes in her blue gaze, shaking her head.
"It is something, silly," Sofia said ((insert appropriate adverb here, plz)). With that, she stepped closer again and...
THE END
xd
j/k, I kid, I kid. I just can't put the next bit here. Hmm...maybe I can work a few more of Sofia's "really?"s into the part I'm working on now...I kinda like the idea. It makes her much more realistic 3nodding Endearingly adorable.
And I don't think endearingly is a word xd
but w/e
So, enjoy that tidbit of writing as it may be a while before I have more. The next part seriously needs some work. Or, it needs to be erased (I wrote everything past this point in pencil). Hmm...idk.
*sigh* Why don't I ever give up when I ought to?
 nepie · Sat Nov 10, 2007 @ 07:06pm · 0 Comments |
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