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 Posted: Fri Aug 29, 2008 4:40 pm
Forbidden Love
Forbidden love, forbidden love
How lovely the taste
Mortal and vampire entwined
The sweetest love undead
Lifestyle of pulsing heartbeats
Lifestyle of crimson blood
Met by undeniable fate
Brought together ever more
Met in the starry moonlight
Danced all through the night
Unlawful choices, only love
Love in the twilight
Broken by diverse entities
Oh, what shall they do?
Forbidden love, forbidden love
Let not bloodlust stir
Pricked by a scarlet rose’s thorn
A tiny bloody droplet
Forbidden love, forbidden love
Fangs draw forth unveiled
His hunger is lurching,
Her face terrified
Forbidden love, forbidden love
Self control maintained again
They proved their suspicions wrong
Their love truly prevailed
Jointly in each others embrace
Love in the twilight
By: Edward Sterling (my pen name)this belings to me and i wrote it, stealing it and saying it is yours is illegal
so please just read and admire, besides this is a draft anyways
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Posted: Fri Aug 29, 2008 4:51 pm
Nice. Very good poem, sister.
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Posted: Fri Aug 29, 2008 5:07 pm
Talidestra Wolf Nice. Very good poem, sister.
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Posted: Fri Aug 29, 2008 5:10 pm
Thank you, sister. It's nice to have feedback on poems here, isn't it?
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Rozen Black Chronicles Crew
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Posted: Fri Oct 17, 2008 6:51 pm
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Posted: Fri Dec 26, 2008 5:46 pm
wow thats really good. i like it a lot. biggrin
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