Lost Memories

• Artist: Legendary PowerfulHeroX
• Description: Not really a poem but I just wanted to write something since I was bored. This is about lost memories.
• Date: 06/26/2011
• Tags: memories

Lost Memories
Lost memories is like it is tied in chains.
It is hard to get it out.
Hard to break it open.
You will have to find the end of the chain ,
and untie it like a puzzle.
But why want to find it?
Why want to get it back?
Is it so important to have it back?
If so , it must be worth it if you think so.
But if you leave it there ,
You would be really curious about it.
Would you leave it for the rest of your life with curiosity,
Or get it back and take the risks?
Who knows.
It's fate that chooses for you.
They're memories.

Please comment below if you like to answer this or comment if you like it. Please do not say it is bad please?

Comments

[Legendary PowerfulHeroX]

I used have for the 8th line.

[Preposterousness]

I like the metaphor of memories being in chains. That its really hard to unlock them again.
I think you should find another word thank back for either the 7th or 8th line, it just doesn't sound good when you use it two times in a row. But otherwise its good, it kind of represents a little in my mind that the past shapes who you are.

[Hey Misterr]

Oh that's great. ^-^ I didn't see any misspelling errors.

[ISO Pudding]

wording is a little hard to read in a few places but it does bring me back memories when I used to write similar things just to be writing something that was going through my head, I kind of miss writing like that, "Lost Memories" brings back some of mine good and bad, any memory is better then a empty space where memories used to be.

[Legendary PowerfulHeroX]

And grammar?

[Legendary PowerfulHeroX]

Bad spelling? :l