- the one thing i ever wanted for you was for you to be happy but you took my heart and destoryed. no as you leave with my heart smashed there is a traiul leading to your door. you have loved and lost you have been hurt and you hurt me but yet i am still here for you. i will be your shoulder to cry on no matter what.
- by james-paws-wolf |
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- | Submitted on 04/12/2011 |
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- Title: goodbye
- Artist: james-paws-wolf
- Description: this poem was inspiered by two of my friends one who i loved but left and the other who was cheted on twice by his girl friend
- Date: 04/12/2011
- Tags: goodbye
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- Rikimaru Zicre - 04/12/2011
- its good but the poem lacks grammer such as traiul i think you meant trail also your poem looks like a story you need stanza's and lines
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