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When he kissed me
The kiss was smooth as silver
With the warmth of his lips.
The love I felt from his kiss
Gave me tingles in my tummy
Each kiss was a shock each time as the last .
When he kissed me
My checks turned rose red
And I felt embarrassed from it.
When he looked into my eyes
And I into his
When we looked at each other we knew
We were soul mates.
- by EmoOtakuKat1 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 04/03/2011 |
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- Title: Silver Kiss
- Artist: EmoOtakuKat1
- Description: This poem is bast on the book the silver kiss and I loved the book so much the I made a poem from it.
- Date: 04/03/2011
- Tags: silver kiss
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- Free_to_Dream - 04/06/2011
- Too much use of the word kiss. Maybe if you kept it constant using silver kiss, or starting the sentence off with kiss then describing? "Kiss, my cheeks turned rose red." I don't know.
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