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Why me in this life
Where people don’t care
If I live or die.
Where
The night only brings
The pain of no place to live.
Why me where
Parents don’t give a care about their kid.
A mother who hates her son
Who didn’t care where he was.
A loving dad who you never saw
Cause he was always at the bar.
Why me were at the corner
All you see
Are a couple of teens
Who don’t care and smoke weed.
Who drink and don’t think
Who they hurt.
And never give a crap
Of anyone but them self.
Why me.
- by KrazyEddie14 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 01/17/2011 |
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- Title: Why Me?
- Artist: KrazyEddie14
- Description: I just could not sleep and I just started typing. First poem in a long time. So I would like to know what people thought. And if you don't like it and you have a jackass comment to make. Please don't post it. I really don't care .
- Date: 01/17/2011
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Anistelle - 06/23/2011
- I consider this more of a free-style poem since I barely see any poetic devices used. I love how you started each stanza with the letter 'W'. Your poem to me depicts a dead end, a melodramatic sense of desperation, and a desire to grasp an opportunity. 4/5
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- EarlsGarden - 01/22/2011
- well to me this seems like a good enough poem, but more poetic devices would make it even better.
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