I'm Alive

• Artist: Baka Naitomea
• Description: I made this poem about how life just flows by without noticing and it feels like your soul has no meaning as you wonder about life and all it will end with is death.
• Date: 11/02/2010
• Tags: alive bored time

Time is moving by
Right before my eyes
I try to slow it down
But all I do is want to drown

I try to sketch the stars
But the light won't go tar
I refuse to wait on by
As my life wants to die

I'm so sick of wasting time
With nothing moving in my mind
Inspiration can't be found
So I get up and find out: I'm Alive

Comments

[PumpkinLookinTeddy]

pretty good razz

[Watashi Wa Anne]

The majority of it is pretty good. I don't care for the last two lines of the first and second verse though. Other than that, it's pretty aweesome

[xEternallyForeverx]

Awesome! >w<

[TeslaRoxacadena]

<3 biggrin