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We all search for that one person
who is worth all the pain
and all the lies.
You both are gonna cry,
both are gonna sigh,
wanna say goodbye,
drawn together
unable to die.
With their hand in yours,
you feel so happy.
Unable to feel mad,
unable to be glad.
Stuck in between
Earth and heaven.
Bottled up emotions for eleven-
years all the endless cans of beers
to get past the pain
hauting you from all that rain
that soaked you through.
Inside you know you dry
Inside you know you wana cry
but all the tears are gone
your excuses are none
your memories are laying across
your front lawn.
You threw everything out
didn't even shout,
and when I came home
you were gone.
You left me a note
one last goodbye,
I felt the tears,
flow down my tie.
I watched as the years
escaped my grasp,
I reached for you
but you just laughed.
You took the car,
took the money,
even took my fish named Honey.
Honey, what is wrong with me?
Why did you leave?
Why didn't you at least...
Believe?
- by xXxXxbabexXxXx |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 08/13/2010 |
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- Title: Believe
- Artist: xXxXxbabexXxXx
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Description:
I take no credit for this poem. It belongs to one of my friends. She asked me to submit it to see what kind of rating it could get. She would also love to hear your thoughts on how she can make it better.
thanks
DesiLee - Date: 08/13/2010
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Comments (2 Comments)
- MartianSongbird - 08/31/2010
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I almost liked it until "even took my fish named Honey."
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- Casca 7 - 08/22/2010
- I like it. o.0 I think it could do without the last word though. Just end it after the ... It will open up the world of longing that your narrator is feeling. (Also, I've heard Naruto say "believe it" too many times.) Overall, great poem though.
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