The Glass Half Full

• Artist: Transcend_Unity
• Description: It's not an original title and I don't own copyrights or anything like that. Anyways it was a kind of cool poem to me since it's different from my usual writing style! Hope you enjoy!
• Date: 06/22/2010
• Tags: glass half full

To withstand the test of time
No reasons no rhyme
When things can turn on a dime
Do we hear the clock chime
Is our time up?
For Elders?
For Pups?
The glass is half full
This is my cup
Six feet under
The might and blunder
Through ash and sunder
Can you hear the thunder?
Is our time up?
For Elders? For Pups?
The glass is half full
This is my cup
A newborn calf
A child's laugh
Pure, after the bath
Damn our time cut in half...
Is our time up?
For Elders? For Pups?
The glass is half full
This is my cup
To be free, elated
My armor's now plated
Don't you take me down now
Not after how long I've waited
Is our time up?
For Elders? For Pups?
The glass is half full
This is MY cup.

Comments

[Stroms_Shadow]

I like it. It very nice flow.

[littlewonder2]

What do you mean by "It's not an original title"? Is it based off something? Otherwise, I don't think you needed to say that stuff.

If it based off something, I'd like to know what.

[Mario the Davidic Hero]

very good rhyming, there! 5/5

[koolkat1299]

if u vot and comment mine ill do the same to ures