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you are so blind
to how divine
you are to me
it seems you run
if you're not having fun
why are you so afraid?
is it because you don't want to face it
that you just want to live and forget
all the bad things in your life
some things you can't get rid of
like that terrible feeling you get when you can't find love
certain things just won't fade away
so in turn i feel stamped with reject and regret
to find all my trying had no affect
on how you see me
- by XxDireFangxX |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 05/20/2010 |
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- Title: unseeing eyes
- Artist: XxDireFangxX
- Description: im not sure where it comes from, but as long as it is...........enjoy
- Date: 05/20/2010
- Tags: brokenheart
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Comments (1 Comments)
- maydaymouse - 05/20/2010
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Very nice. I'm sure there are many who can relate to this, and you displayed it very well. Though, it could flow a bit better with some spelling and grammar fixes here and there. So, I'll give a 4/5. Keep writing!
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