Losing Daylight

• Artist: The Intoxicating Siren
• Description: I wrote this out of experience. it was when i finally though i found love, and clung onto the feeling of what i made out to be forever, and cherished the feeling. But when my boyfriend dumped me, things changed and i sorta started going crazy. I thought he would return along with those happy feelings, but in the end i gave up and moved on.
• Date: 04/14/2010
• Tags: losing daylight

Feel that?
That sunshine?
Dancing
on your skin.

Embrace
The warmpth
Cherish it
Forever

Its a one
in a lifetime
Chance
So don't forget it.

Doesn't it
Just feel so great?
Don't you feel
Just so loved?

It feels
Ever so inviting
So Beautiful
So Amazing

You don't
Wanna lose it
This glorious
Glorious feeling.

But alas
The clouds roll in
And your warmpth
Is forever gone

Lost
in the sea of clouds
It hides
Never to come back

As the rain falls
You wonder why?
Wonder if the feeling
will ever return

You lose hope
Thinking
Its gone forever
That enjoyable feeling

As the clouds grow thicker
You snap
Not able to take it
The sense of lossing

You try
And try
Just to convince yourself
But nothing works

"Things will get better"
You repeat to yourself
But
The rain only falls harder

You hope
You pray
You wish
But nothing happens

Where did it go
The lovely feeling
Well...
Just give up, its not coming back.

Comments

[Eternal Remembrance]

Alright, amazingly compelling story in the description, it made me tear up a little =,l
But the only, and ONLY thing I saw wrong was you spelled "sense" like "sence"
Other than that, awesome job, and I know how awesome people feel when they get comments, cause I feel that way. So here you go! 5/5 =D