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When I see in the life of love,
Everything seems to embark;
Then here, flies out the dove,
And everything goes dark.
But I should come out to see,
In the love of no light;
Then maybe, just maybe,
We won't stay in night.
The darkness, though, still covers over,
And there is no place to stay warm;
I try and go to the white cliffs of Dover,
But then, there, here starts a storm.
Oh how I despise,
My utter demise.
- Title: Life of Love
- Artist: meow2933
- Description: We had to do a poem in Language Arts today for Shakespearean Sonnet. This is what was created...
- Date: 04/12/2010
- Tags: life love
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Faerie - 04/17/2010
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It has potential biggrin
But you could work on it a bit more "in the love of no light" doesnt make much sense...work on that. - Report As Spam
- meow2933 - 04/13/2010
- Thank you.
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- Sub-Par Man - 04/13/2010
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that's very good.
5/5 - Report As Spam