An Abyss

• Artist: fuyukihana
• Description: I want to hear what you think of my poetry, please be honest and leave comments.
• Date: 02/17/2010
• Tags: abyss poetry love

Should I tell you, or say nothing at all?
To tell you could surely be my longest fall.
To stay quiet for longer hurts slowly and deep,
But to tell you I love you is too risky a leap.

Comments

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The title only barely connects to the piece. It's a short simple little thing, but simplicity can often have power. Not bad; see what you can build with it.