Letting Me Go

• Artist: Lord Vassago
• Description: I'm sure there is always a time in somebodies life that they feel held back or restricted by another. I wrote this poem because of a comment that was said to me by such a person whom I could no longer stand. Please feel free to comment because i always like feedback on things that I can improve and such. Thank-you for your time =D
• Date: 01/12/2010
• Tags: leaving reality farewell goodbye control

Was left an object in the dark
All because of your remark

I’m not too sure that I should stay
Scared and lonely everyday

For now you are a curse to me
Won’t let go and set me free

Your presence eats away my soul
You weren’t the one to make me whole

To you this is my farewell
A last goodbye that I will tell

It is with pride that I depart
From your world to my fresh start

Comments

[xDiscobloodbath]

Very nice, you can't be around someone if they make you unhappy.
I find it better just to part ways so I love the last two lines. smile

[PoeticWindstorm]

wonderful!!!! i truly love the thought that you put into it smile i could tell that you took this from your own heart...lol yes i read the description but still...i could tell biggrin