youth

• Artist: Vito321
• Description: different
• Date: 12/22/2009
• Tags: youth

life is short but painless says one
life is cold and hard says another
life is both i say
but youth is neither

what makes youth
time makes youth
but the question is what do you do with it
do you make it short and painless
or do you make it cold and hard

it is your choise
life is short and painless
life is cold and hard
but youth is neither

Comments

[-max-15-dream-]

oh, very good. i can rel8, and thats a sign of a good poem! keep writing, ill be reading!!! biggrin

[Svantevit]

I'd give this a higher rating if the grammar was better.
Just some simple punctuation.
Other than that, its a good piece and I wish you well in the arenas!