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This fear has been looming...
The constant pain of this all being a dream...
I never want to wake up from it...
To look into your eyes,
To see you smile,
To wonder what is going on in your head...
I turn away for a few moments and see you gone...
Am I finally awake?
Was it really all a dream?
Yet you come back and my heart rejoices,
Although I have to wonder and fear...
When will it end...
When will it fade...
I want to scream never, but this is the real world...
Hearts don't love for forever anymore...
It seems mine is the only one that clings to the love that transcends death...
- by Selene_Deathdealer |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/03/2009 |
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- Title: When Will It End?
- Artist: Selene_Deathdealer
- Description: Random poem
- Date: 12/03/2009
- Tags: will
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Comments (1 Comments)
- Chronic Awesome - 12/13/2009
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You're really overdoing the ellipses. Putting so many dots at the end of every line doesn't add much effect and it makes it look a little ugly.
Aside from that, it's deep. =) - Report As Spam