If Only

• Artist: ---ErudaXhienz-13---
• Description: "if only you knew that a heart is waiting for you".. it's the message for this poem^^
  the poem is a story between a poor and a rich.. which is the poor is the main character that is longing for love to a man... a rich man..
  please enjoii, comment, and vote :D
• Date: 09/12/2009
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I've been waiting you for so long
Only to give you this song
Suddenly my love shines
Hoping that you'll be mine

We walk in separate roads;
The road of thorns and golds,
I knew you all got the riches
And I just have these stitches.

"If only you knew", as my heart said
This love will never fade
Can't you feel the sweet breeze of the air?
Eventhough you can't feel, i knew inside my heart you are still.

I got the disappointment and sorrows in me
`Cause I can't get what I want
Suddenly it makes me real,
I'll just pray to make you mine

Witches and storms could not make me stop
Because I knew I'm destined for you
For your love is so brilliant
That the evil will run away

I loved you for who you are
And hope that you also felt that in me
Even in your darkest nights
I am just here, waiting for you to come.

Comments

[ExplodingPlastic]

I leiks it

[The Fixxxer]

Good poem, keep it up ^_^

[xForgotten_Dreamerx]

I love this poem
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