Reluctant Love

• Artist: Bloody Biography
• Description: i finally finished after 2 hours..(i was checking my most busiest thread over which bugged me)
• Date: 08/17/2009
• Tags: reluctant love

I may not be perfect but it's you that I love
When I think about you I see a dove
A bird that strides so confidently
It never flies the least bit bluntly

The way you speak, the way you care
Makes me appreciate the curl in your hair
I love you more than words can describe
It's that love that makes me fantasize

I always wonder if I'll ever meet you
And if I did, what I would do
I love you, can't you see
You are the one for me

Comments

[DDrox316]

I agree with the other 2, the rhyming is a bit forced... if you don't try so hard and you have strong feelings about something (enough to write a poem about? surprised ) the words will just flow out your head, trust me smile

[RePPePrD]

It's too structured and uptight, but there's no real feeling behind it, seems like. I can see you wanted to do something, but it didn't seem to go over so well as you liked.

[-PaTcHeS_oF_Love-]

It seems like you had no plan for the poem. That you struggled to come up with the words. That it truely has little meaning but that you really wanted to get something out of your head. You tried too hard, Sweetie.

[x-Snickers 0476-x]

that was cuuute ^^