Voracious

• Artist: P00R L3N0
• Description: just wanna know what people think.
  
• Date: 08/11/2009
• Tags: voracious

Arms entangled
Legs ensnared
Hands clasped tightly
Dust floats in from the ceiling fan that always hisses
The air of stale cigarettes and lovemaking lingers in the room
And enters slumbering nostrils
Your soft, almost purr like breathing has me awake
And hungering for more of your touch and old cigarettes
Your lashes tickle my cheek
Your tongue tastes my lips
Three minutes awake and we're already lost
Lusting each other like ravenous ETHIOPIAN CHILDREN

Comments

[Ninja Disco Frog]

Nice stuff. I love the words you used to describe everything. I can actually picture it in my head clearly. I'll be looking for more :3

[Fake Silence]

I liked it. But, I also would have liked it more if it had punctuation.
*grins*
Nah, I'm just being difficult. Keep it up!

[Agito Z Wilder]

Very engaging...your imagination is brilliant...i shall look forward to ur next one biggrin

[AnimeCaterpillar]

i liked it. i found it very descriptive and very detailed. good job!