Prejudice

• Artist: Raypg
• Description: Just another poem. I'm trying to spit a bunch of peoms out, I haven't been publishing many lately. (:
• Date: 07/23/2009
• Tags: prejudice

She's like cigarettes, so easy to fall into habit with
To inhale her is to set your insides on fire
Her touch hot, piercing
Her look invisible, indetectable
She'll wrap her claws around you
Sink her nails into you skin
Hiss and screech critisism to you
Run your mind as nicotene does
Change you
Her name is Prejudice
And she's a b*tch

Comments

[ElectraShocked]

I like the metaphor, but I agree with Rygaen, it is slightly unclear to me too. But It's still got really really good imagery...This is my type of poem XD.

[Rygaen Yuui]

I fricken love your imagery...

But I have to say that I'm not sure if the metaphor worked for me, or maybe it's just unclear to me the way I'm reading it: Prejudice is like cigarettes, therefore Prejudice is an ugly addiction that kills your lungs.