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Oh
My
God
I never thought
I'd make it here
Not in a million
Zillion
Dream-filled years
Of longing
And waiting
And sigh
-ing
At the stars
Trying to hold back tears
I never thought -
- And Oh!
Now that I'm here
I can
Drink deeply
The waters of your soul
Tread slowly
Into the rivers of your sorrows
Dive swiftly
(And with no hesitation)
Into the lakes of your pleasures
I can
Let your voice
And touch
Pulse through my body like waves
Let your lips
Land on my throat
Land on my mouth
Land on my body
And in my hair
With the gentle caress of mist
With the fierceness of a typhoon
As often as raindrops splatter
On your windowpane
Outside
A bitter pitter
Patter
And let me know
With your eyes
Like orbs
Of Dew
And your voice
Warm
And Content
Like lazy lagoon
Let me know
That you still feel the same
As I do now
That way
Each time we meet
Will be
Like
Liquid
- by iwroteholdencaulfield |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/16/2009 |
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- Title: Liquid
- Artist: iwroteholdencaulfield
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Description:
As tank girl once said (mind you, this was referring to a tank): "I think I'm in love!"
This is a bit of me meets gooey, romantic shakespear so, don't ask how tank girl even has anything to do with this. XD
Please comment, I am very open to feedback. :) - Date: 07/16/2009
- Tags: liquid
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Comments (1 Comments)
- xXAlternate RealityXx - 07/18/2009
- very good! I liked that all of it didn't rhyme but the excellent metaphors made up for it. 4/5!!
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