as i lay here

• Artist: missy jayj
• Description: just a poem i wrote based on how i felt last night:]
• Date: 07/15/2009
• Tags: asilayhere

as i lay here, awaiting dark noon to touch my soul, i wonder what you are thinking of me,
do you think im shallow and wide of envy? or lost and confused? all i can think of is how you will talk to me tomorrow. whether you shun me and spy, or just forget about the mistakes.
it seems so far when it's right in front of me starring me in the eyes, the deep spirits confusing me. so i will just Lye here and set down to die.

Comments

[shinto archeron]

i enjoyed reading this, it shows the inner most workings of a persons soul and the complexities of everyday life. i like the very first line, it's so full of emotion.my top friend and i are huge poetry buffs and i will recommend this to him, keep writing poetry, and use all the emotions u feel, that and only that defines a great poet.