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Good versus Evil,
Causes such an upheaval.
For Good is Bad, And Bad is Good,
The line between, So misunderstood.
As Left is Right, And Black is White,
The very Truth is out of sight...
- by InThruTheOutDoor |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 06/28/2009 |
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- Title: Polarity
- Artist: InThruTheOutDoor
- Description: Just another of my short poems... If you like this, Check out my other stuff. Thanks.
- Date: 06/28/2009
- Tags: polarity
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- Taste of a Raindrop - 06/29/2009
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Interesting. If you're going to have a rhyme scheme, the lines must have the same number of syllable beats. For example:
See Spot Run
Into The Sun
This is uneven because of the unequal syllables. It would be better if 'twas:
See Spot Run
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