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Dawn shows the silver smoke,
the mist which before hid out of sight.
It reveals the winding, twisting strands,
tangling and twirling in the cool milky light.
The soft fire seeps between the trees,
tainting dewy cobwebs blood red.
A gentle breeze sways leafless branches
yet by them not a word is said.
Dawn peaks the trees, drives shadows back
yet still the world does not wake.
The glassy surface of a river breaks,
for when a single drop falls, all the world quakes.
Ripples distort, the sun bends, branches fall
and all once again is wrong.
The sun goes cold, the world’s no longer gold,
but the dawn never lasts very long.
And so begins our lament.
We call for the world as it used to be,
full of wonders and peace and glee.
We yearn for all that we once had,
but never again shall be.
For the sun is gone, the world is dead,
the dawn has left for all time.
It rose before, in other lands
in places we thought would remain true.
Yet every time a ripple came
it doused our hopes anew.
Will dawn give this world another chance,
or have we gone a step too far?
Every day we pray, we run the other way,
but perhaps we’ve lost our star.
Dawn may have passed away, and though we give chase,
for redemption we’ve gone too far.
And so we bring about our doom.
The world is cold and dark and black,
there’s no place left with light.
We’ve seen this before, but the difference now
is we shall not leave the night.
We shall never return to light.
- Title: The World's End
- Artist: Gylfie531
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Description:
A poem I wrote because this world is so sad now... We have destroyed and defiled it with evil... This is my generic interpretation of the Western World, its rise and its fall. It won my school's writing contest, so I thought I'd see what gaians think!
**Please comment on what I could do better with this; I always want to improve myself!** - Date: 06/04/2009
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Comments (1 Comments)
- fancy-painted-boats- - 06/06/2009
- It's a good poem. I like your word choice. ^^ I won a poetry contest at my school too! 5/5
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