a poem i wrote.....

• Artist: v v starlight lunaria v v
• Description: this poem spoke out to me when i first wrote it, its in my journal, but you cant see it unless your my friend, one of my friends told me that its awsome, so feel free to tell me what you think cuz im not much of a writer or a poet, im more of an artist, so stuff like poetry is sorta new to me......
• Date: 05/31/2009
• Tags: poem wrote

oh the times we hate,
of the times we love,
why do we fight?

oh the times we laugh,
of the times we cry,
why do we lie?

when we fall,
when we are alone,
we hear the lords call.

when we are weak,
when we lie awake,
we cant find what we seek.

when we are strong,
when we help those in need,
we know where we belong.

let us all be as a nation should be,
and work together,
for all to see,

that we can raise our hands to the sky,
and sing praise to the lord for what he has given us,
that together we can rebuild the earth and our lives if we try.

Comments

[bunnyfan194]

ah that's amazing!! ^_^ you're a natural with words, keep writing and you'll get even better *nod nod* i hope you go far with poetry, it's really fun!

[v v starlight lunaria v v]

why thank you

[PoeticWindstorm]

not bad smile i think u should keep working u might do really well