my heart

• Artist: Xxhells bloodxX
• Description: here is pretty much what my heart is and some other happenings and this is another free verse
• Date: 05/30/2009
• Tags: heart dead depressing rock cold

my heart is
just like stone
a hard, cold, heart is mine
almost dead

why did you take so much time to crush it
why did you take the time to cover my heart in cement
to turn it to stone
to kill me inside

now i can't love
i don't care any more
i can't care any more

you took the time to turn my warm heart
cold
stone
what for?
can you explain?
i think not

now as i lie on the floor
cold and dying
you tell me i'll be warmer in hell
for i shall go to hell to get the warmth i could not find on earth

now i slowly fade
i turn to dust
for the next breeze takes me away
blown to nowhere
can't be found
but my heart a rock stays in the cold world
for it does not move with the breeze
it is to heavy to move on to any where

Comments

[Amvu]

When I look at this piece, I see a portrait. But I don't see shades and hues. I see simple color progressions that I feel can be more artistically inclined. Emotion is a good canvas for poetry, but keep trying! Another thing too, I've seen waaaaay to many painful poems on gaia. Try writing a poem about something that makes you happy.

[Wunderful_Coffee_Cup]

i luv this poem

[DawnxDestruction]

BRAVO~!
i luv ur poem ish so heart-warming
write some more ur
very good, but hope u get
over these feelings.
this ish the best 1 i've read 2day~!