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I gazed in your eyes,
Such a beautiful blue;
My heart whispered to me,
And that’s right when I knew;
The waves had ceased crashing,
On the sand at our feet;
Time had stopped passing,
My search was complete;
I finally discovered,
What I'd known all along;
A mystery uncovered,
That just couldn't be wrong;
It wasn't our first kiss,
Nor' the day that we met;
But I realized something,
I will never forget;
With the stars shining brightly,
From high up above;
I'd one word to describe it,
That word, is love.
I knew then these feelings,
For my sweetheart were true;
The woman of my dreams,
And my soul mate, is you.
I think of it every time,
That I look at the stars;
This memory is mine,
But that moment was
OURS.
- by Naoto the Ace Defective |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 05/30/2009 |
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- Title: Everytime I look at the stars
- Artist: Naoto the Ace Defective
- Description: When I finally learned I was in love.
- Date: 05/30/2009
- Tags: everytime look stars
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Comments (6 Comments)
- Bloodysideofthemoon - 11/01/2009
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WOW!! i don't think there's a better word that could describe that!!!!
the girl your talking about is quite lucky to have a guy who can write like that!!! - Report As Spam
- SparkleBear6661 - 10/03/2009
- One of the best poems I've read in a while, beautiful. smile )
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- Xellica22 - 08/03/2009
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rolleyes well. . . that was just so. . .
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WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i wuv it. whee - Report As Spam
- scitama - 06/07/2009
- That was really really good! I liked how you rhymed everything too!
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- Naoto the Ace Defective - 05/31/2009
- Thanks,
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- stefanie134 - 05/31/2009
- nice!.. i really love it!.. great work!..
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