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A churning pool of water
Resting at my feet
Within it dwells some mysteries,
Nothing could compete.
As my blood overcomes my tears,
I flashback on this moment.
It could end here,
In the peace and quiet.
But I was too afraid
Of the pain that some may endure.
With the end of a life,
Comes a greif so deep and profound
It would tear the strongest man to shreads.
"What do I care!" I shouted through my tears.
And then i jumped.
- by ElectraShocked |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 05/28/2009 |
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- Title: Flashback
- Artist: ElectraShocked
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Description:
Sometimes things don't work out as you plan because of the fact that you are cursed with memories and bewitched by a conscience.
- Date: 05/28/2009
- Tags: flashback
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Nana Shinu Ai - 08/17/2009
- great job
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- Rin128563 - 08/09/2009
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that was really good i liked it alot.
Thanks for the comment smile 5/5 - Report As Spam
- SharksAndDanger - 08/02/2009
- Well described, nice ryhmes. Makes me think of my high school days. Good job.
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- Mentalpatient1288 - 07/28/2009
- wow, ur good!
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- Kimi232 - 07/27/2009
- Wow.. I think it's good ^_^
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- ElectraShocked - 07/23/2009
- bleh, I don't like this one that much...
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- Monique8 - 05/31/2009
- Nice.
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