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who is this man,
who fights me in my dreams,
Who tells me he loves me but then he leaves,
I dream of him coming back,
But the feelings shatter, tatter, and crack.
When he whispers I love you and I'll be home soon,
I wake up crying wishing i was with you.
I'll scream out for you to take me with you,
But you never hear me,
Do you?
He whisps me away and gives me hope,
for the time that ive been given,
Im not allowed to Mope,
his words like ice all down my back,
It might be a turn on if I kiss him back,
His touch just beyond sweet finger tips,
And I wish to taste just once his venomus lips.
The days will go on and I'll wake screaming,
Till the day you come out of my dreams and stay with me ,
Not leaving.
- Title: who is this man in my dreams?
- Artist: Suka_love
- Description: I dont know how you can view this? its complicated really, im a happy person i just love emotion and in this poetry I hope you can feel it.
- Date: 05/19/2009
- Tags: dreams
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Comments (1 Comments)
- Inyuashi 23 - 05/19/2009
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Now this is just lovely. It's so potent...I love it, really, I love it.
The only controversial part for me is where you switch from using the third person (he) to the second person (you).
Really...I lack words for this, this is just too beautiful to describe...
The feeling...I can relate...
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