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Why has the days gone cold?
Teardrops falling off faces,
red covering white,
shadows over light,
when did the world go wrong?
why?
Through the valley of tears,
she walks through the night,
watching the happiness that she only wishes.
Inside, her emotions controls her,
fire of hate,
dying of sadness,
fearing of happiness,
and heat of rage.
The universe overrules her,
while she is trying to make peace,
she tries to laugh,
but she only gets hate.
One day the sun will shine on her,
but she refuses on that day.
She has done the deal,
and must never go back...
The world has gone cold, and she still stands waiting.
Will anyone forgive her?
When everyone comes back,
will she be there waiting?
Nobody will ever know...
- by iiHeart-Shu- |
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- | Submitted on 05/15/2009 |
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- Title: Pain Without ♥
- Artist: iiHeart-Shu-
- Description: ok so i just made this up while i was in class. my friend was really sad about something so i wrote this about her. please don't say "Oh this is sooo emo" cuz it's not! ok enjoy ;3
- Date: 05/15/2009
- Tags: pain without peace
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Tiej - 05/19/2009
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that entire poem spelled out emo for me
stanza three... ridiculous and ludicrous
and the idea of her 'refusing on that day' is hypocritical to the line 'she tries to make peace'
must compliment you on the line ;the universe overrules her; thou quite nice and it summed up your friends problem
3/5
btw...pay attention in class
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- Jeca066 - 05/18/2009
- totally emo, just kidding just trying to piss you off, there was a lot of mix messages here, I like the anger over riding peace concept, sounds Gothic, tell your friend he/she should be Gothic because anger is usually our peace.
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