A Wooden Wheel

• Artist: icyblueroses137
• Description: Another poem from my poetry project.
• Date: 05/10/2009
• Tags: wooden wheel

A wooden wheel on a dirt road
Goes on and on never ending
Each spoke heaving a heavy load
A new message to be sending

Goes on and on never ending
Bumps up, bumps down, bumps all around
A new message to be sending
Never once would it leave the ground.

Bump up, bumps down, bumps all around
Though no flaws are yet to exist
Never once would it leave the ground
A small smooth ride is a life missed

Though no flaws are yet to exist
Each spoke heaving a heavy load
A small smooth ride is a life missed
A wooden wheel on a dirt road.

Comments

[misspopularity126]

good job alto! Check out my fiction story jonas brothers arctic book 1 and poem The sky is speacial

[icyblueroses137]

Thanks! biggrin

[aliasJaneDoe]

ACK! You make me happy! You're the first entry I've read that actually seems to pay attention to the way the words sound and the images they bring, as well as keeping a good visual presention. MAJOR POINTS FOR YOU!!!