SuReNdEr

• Artist: Jemp10
• Description: I wrote this because everytime my father left for IRAQ, his life was in danger. And its really depressing. And so is this poem. Well, not really, i wrote this because its what i do in my dreams when my father is gone.
• Date: 05/01/2009
• Tags: surender

From night i am callen,
Just to burn all happiness,
That remains from the day,
Im on calling for hell,
Where most humans belong,
Wishing we could relive life.

- heart All Mii Famiilii and Freiiends heart

Comments

[Alkestic]

hmmm short clear dreamy nice use of comparetion but keep practicin u will get better 3/5