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Send Me Down I Wear No Frown
I don't like Heaven
or the Archangels of seven
I'd rather go to Hell,
where I'd be much more well.
I'd rather be warm
in the different form
of a burning fire,
by my own desire.
The angels
would tangle
me up in their wings,
for I am not careful with those kinds of things.
The Devil's spear
would not derive a tear
and would be much easier to bear,
than God's stringent stare.
I fear great heights
and also bright lights
it's easier under the floor,
in the place I quite adore.
I fear my fate
to go there at this rate
up there I don't belong,
rather down here with the stark throng.
I don't want to fly
for surely I will die
when I fall to the ground,
back where I should've been bound.
I really am good-hearted
my humanity has not yet departed
but I still have yet to see the love,
of that castle up above.
So whether I'm certainly right
or dead wrong when in light
you may as well
just send me to Hell.
- Title: Send me down I wear no frown
- Artist: Usaji-san
- Description: I'm generally a nice an' happy person, I don't know where this came from. :XD I pretty much just took words that rhymed and attached phrases to them. I some people are religous and I hope this doesn't offend anyone who is or isn't! (This is also for a book which works with a different and uncommon religion I am of)
- Date: 04/24/2009
- Tags: send down wear frown
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Comments (5 Comments)
- JRockerLife - 07/28/2009
- That's very deep and kinda evil in it's own way. I like it a lot. Check out my poems if you want.^^
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- Usaji-san - 04/26/2009
- Thanks everyone! ^.^
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- sweet black kitty kat - 04/26/2009
- ...awsome!...lol...^_^
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- serenityofsand - 04/24/2009
- Oh, by the way, if any religious people harass you, tell them this: In the Bible, God sendt bears to maul several children, simply because they were supposedly "mocking" one of the disciples. Ludicrous, isn't it?! Ha, and they all ramble on about "God's love", and other nonsense of the like... It's sickening, quite frankly. XP
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- serenityofsand - 04/24/2009
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Ooh, that's very intriguing, and the concept is quite unique... If I may say, there were a few small aspects of the poem that grammatically and rhythmically could use some revision... Yet I never meant to offend you by saying that, honestly! ^^U You have here a spectacular piece of work, and I was merely hoping to help... If you would like some advice, I'll gladly help, yet I never meant to intrude. ^^U
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