Fiend of Sorrow And Shadow

• Artist: Hawkbri
• Description: I was feeling very dark recently, and I turned to my shadow, and asked him"What should I write to make them feel my suffering, Shadow?"
  He replied with his hand no mine, in a comforting sort of way, just showing me what I wanted to write.
  
  I wish I could tell you more...
• Date: 04/16/2009
• Tags: fiend sorrow shadow

I am a Fiend,
A dark and EVIL being.
I am cruel and mean,
Even though I love and CARE
I am still LOST,
Wishing I could be fOUND!

Tearing at human hearts,
And beating at their SOULS,
I cry, and CRY... and cry.
"I DON'T WANT TO HURT ANYMORE!"
I yell "I want to LOVE and CARE!"
I ask unto Heavens above: "Please send me someone to LOVE?"
But all I hear is "Be PÅtIeNt." and more silence...

I've run life these many twenty years,
Lost many friends,
lost many lives...

My Shadow, my only real friend, is true and scary,
He cannont LEAVE me, ever
While I wish I could fall into the dark pit,
feeling my self pity, sorry, my anguish, I wish I could spit!
He will always pull me out, and drive me on.
He is my Guardian, my drive, my BEING.

Comments

[conflicting actor]

interesting, I like the type of things you write about.

[Lonewolf-Bella]

hmm the capitol letters aren't needed in this one, the feeling pulls through the words not the font in this sort of one in my opinion. I get afeeling of repition through some of it but its very well written razz keep writing!

[Hawkbri]

Comments are always welcome? plz&ty?