False love.

• Artist: humpty_bumpty
• Description: Fake feelings.
• Date: 04/14/2009
• Tags: false love

Love
It is a double edged sword
it lets you fall into a place where you do not want to leave
then it drops you into a pit of darkness
and despair
it can be real
but most choose to fake it
it can lead to many a great day
or it can lead to wanting to die
it can tear your heart in half
or it can mend it just the same
but love is a game
you can win it or lose it
if losing means to have the other person feel better in the end
i choose to lose
i choose to feel like wanting to die
i choose to have my heart ripped in half
i choose to be sad
because i know
even if i am not with you
can't share the same things i did before
i will still be happy at the sight of you not crying
i will suffer the broken heart for you
i will do everything to keep you happy
i will do what i should've done
made you happy all the time
this is the only promise i can keep

Comments

[humpty_bumpty]

thank you for the comments, i am just curious how you came upon my stuff? also do you have any posted stories and such that you need a little input on? course the way you make it sound like you hardly make mistakes cause you read and re-read your stuff. When i post things it is usally late and i am half alseep but don't want to go to bed, so i write and post. So i know there is mistakes, and honestly i try to fix most of the stuff i mess up but well who doesn't?

[bloodygirl17]

Needs alot of punctuation and capatalize every beginning line, whether the former has no punctuation at the end. Always end the last line of a poem with a period.