~``~my love~``<3

• Artist: Fizii
• Description: [color=lime]this is about my ex-boyfriend who i dumped. he was using me so that he could get attention when he kissed me. so to you, jt, good ridance!~``<3[/color]
• Date: 04/07/2009
• Tags: love

just as you say my spirit touched your heart,
as does yours oh sweet,
ad as love shall carry me away,
i flick around my feet.
the love we hold together,
will never be the same
oh you i know your feelings,
i'm just a piece on your game.<3

Comments

[maydaymouse]

I like the poem, and understand where you're coming from completely. But, just fix the spelling and grammar errors, those are my only problems with it. Other then that, nice job. 4/5
Rate back please?

[UC Poika]

I don't understand the reason but it's a pretty good poem

[Fizii]

that thingy with the thing.. yeah srry i dnt know it wouldnt work..
lol..
but yeah srry for the mishap.