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Lame child of indignity, in silent scream
tab you have restricted your voice that could
tab have filled the air with symphony.
You are a breathing victim of the thief of the night,
Crippled and blinded at the midst of the night,
Blurred is your vision of the wrong and the right,
You are abandoned in a precarious circumstance.
Oh body of a barely beating heart, the claws
tab of the hideous beast lurking behind the
tab superficial mask has marked its territory.
You have been invaded deep down to the core,
Stolen is the innocence from your most fragile core,
The shame and the pain and the struggle you bore,
Have scarred your soul and stained your life away.
Impaired senses and a stumped faith push
tab your muddled sanity to the edge of all odds,
tab draining all resilience from you.
Vengeance, a word that you soundlessly speak,
Is now laid upon you; though you dared not to speak,
The table is turned; there's no need to be meek,
Close your eyes and breathe deeply, his fate is in your hands.
- Title: Play a Paramour
- Artist: meizha
- Description: For all the victims of the night; you are the bravest of the brave.
- Date: 04/03/2009
- Tags: playaparamour
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Comments (5 Comments)
- The Forgotten Crusader - 05/07/2009
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I enjoy the rhymes here and saw nothing wrong with them. The wording just seemed to blow me away. I'm curious as to your age... Your vocabulary seems beyond the average college level.
The only line that seems out of place is the second to last... It seems so straightforward compared to the rest of the poem. This is definitely one of my favorites in the entire arena. I look forward to more things to read in the future from you. - Report As Spam
- meizha - 04/15/2009
- Thank you. =)
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- UC Poika - 04/14/2009
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I really like it. wonderful job meizha.
keep it up. - Report As Spam
- meizha - 04/12/2009
- Thanks. I'm not really good at rhymes and this one, I just kinda wrote it out of the blue.
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- cooll666725 - 04/10/2009
- Very nice XD!!! ^_^ We true-to-the-core poets need to stick together. I'm going to read all of your poems and rate them with honesty. *tips hat* I give this one a 5/5. There is room for improvement on the rhyme, though.
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