Space Between

• Artist: KreampuffVT
• Description: A poem inspired by Tinker Bells line in "Hook"
  
  "You know that place where your asleep but still awake? That place is where my love for you will always stay"
• Date: 03/26/2009
• Tags: space between hook tinkerbell poem

In this sweet land of green.
I realize you're nothing more than a dream
My love for you is forever real.
Your feelings whimmed and turned.
I couldn't be that one.
The one that pleased you long enough.
The one worth it all for none.
Thought you could have been for me.
I could not have been for you.
So my love stays in this place.
Where I am not wake
Where sleep alludes.
This place where dreams where reality meets.
Where my wish can come true.
That wish to forever be with you.
Stuck in this between world.
I sit in my field of green where I can dream.
Till time passes and you will seem.
Nothing more than a dream

Comments

[m!mi]

its great but from my experience poetry is usually easier to read in couplets. people are more likely to get through it if it flows.