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im sinking deeper
im going under
i grow colder
and i wonder....
is there more for me
on the other side?
can i be me?
cuz i hate to hide
or is there really
another side
im afraid to no
wat happens when you die...
the light is fading
the deeper i go
i am drowning
and it helps to know
that its almost over
im almost done
the blackness holds me
there is no more sun
the suddenly
i see a light
its not like sunlight
but nothing like night
i follow it
as it drifts near
i try to touch it
i have no fear
when i reach it
it starts to grow
its all around me
and i no
that finnaly
i am gone
i am releived
because i have won
- by vampire_goth_girl69 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 03/09/2009 |
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- Title: sinking deeper
- Artist: vampire_goth_girl69
- Description: plz add a comment, but if its on something i did bad or wrong give advice on how to fix it cuz there will probly be more where this came from!
- Date: 03/09/2009
- Tags: sinking deeper
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Comments (3 Comments)
- icekingcripwsc - 05/23/2009
- I LOVE IT HOPE YOU DONT FILL DAT WAY
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- icekingcripwsc - 05/23/2009
- YOUER GOOD
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- Another Tipsy Sailor - 03/10/2009
- This isn't bad. Work on your spelling a bit and you could probably submit this to a young adult poetry magazine or something.
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