The Next Day

• Artist: AshRocks447
• Description: I don't wanna see tommorow. I don't wanna live that long.
• Date: 02/22/2009
• Tags: depression pain suffering

As I cut
through layers of skin
I feel sorrow
deep within

If only someone
could truly care
But until then
my skin I'll tear

As the blood
begins to pour
I need someone
To reassure

Is there someone
that i can love
Is there someone
peaceful as a dove

I wonder this
and watch the blood pour out
If mother saw
she'd sream and she'd shout

"What would happen"
she's say
"if you didn't make it
to see the next day?"

To see the
Next day
I don't really want to
see the game we'll play

To see The next day
is more sorrow to endure
To see the next day
is so horrible I'm sure

Comments

[PeachPride21]

There will never be an end to sorrow in this world. We can only hope that it will get a little better, but it never does.
Love the poem, i know the feeling.

[x M ii k i]

This Is So EMo

[justcallmejack]

i know how u feel.......
the 1 guy i REALLY luvec(and still do)
said "i luv u" but ended up he lied....
i've never been the same ..
but think like this:tomorow maybe ill see the light,
maybe tomorow ill find the 1 who REALLY under stands.
and for all u know that person could all ready be,but u just dont know it =)
5/5!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
hope u find that person soon =)!!!

[Fake Silence]

I like this. But, if you are really thinking that way, you could talk to me...
i might not give good advice, but i'll listen to everything you have to say.
*smile*
*BTW, rate and comment my work too, okay?

[King of Trash]

Sorrow is the only truth... 5/5
An Excellent poem my dear...

[Universal-Path]

I'm really not a fan of depressing poetry. Sadness is just too easy to write and describe about.

Sorry, it's just too cliche.