Rejection from Blood Relation

• Artist: Coldcut2009
• Description: I wrote this on January 26 of 2008 with a new idea for a book in mind. I found it on my computer and i want to see what others think of it. So be true on opinions with me---critism improves writing.
  I'm open with friendship to others who love art in anyway and to those who just wanna talk.
  
  Thank you for reading
• Date: 02/19/2009
• Tags: rejection from blood relation

You used come home in the afternoons
Tired from work
When things weren’t going your way
I think your mind wanted to burst
We got lazier, and ruder,
And it seemed like we didn’t give a ***
It wasn’t anyone else’s fought
Just are own accepting in the trans
I’m sorry for those days
When I could have been better
To you and daddy
Even when ya’ll weren’t together
Why didn’t I obey the commandment:
To honor dad and you
The world took it’s aim on me
I just need time for my mind to sooth
So I could be free
Free from the pain of guilt,
And the loss of the treasure
But will your love leave - never