The Game Of L.I.F.E.

• Artist: l Serendipity l
• Description: In my opinion, this is one of my worst pieces. Originally, I never planned on letting anyone see this, but its been a while since it was written and now I figure, why not. Its a little more personal than my other poems so please don't bash it. Constructive criticism is welcomed though. Thanks!
  
  (Note this was not meant to sound suicidal or like the person died in the end. That's just how it came out. I didn't even realize that until just now lol. smaaart hm?)
• Date: 02/11/2009
• Tags: game life

It drives me crazy, but also makes me glad
To think of all the things that I once had.

And so is Life.

After all these years, is the charm gone.
Throwing me for loops; leaving me disarmed.

Forfeiting, giving up, letting the demons win.
Running from the light, but letting the darkness in.

Becoming it; heartless
Becoming the darkness.

Life.

Thinking it'll only take one shot and you're dead.
Realizing the sickness buried
within your own head.

Not today.

Letting each question pass, pretending nothings wrong
Secretly wondering "How will I go on?"

Screaming on the inside, smiling on the out
Crying for the end, only to be outweighed by doubt.

And so is Life.

Making us cry,
'Til the day we die.

Calling out for help, reaching for a hand
Grasping onto the one that drops you again and again.

IN THE END.

The lights go out, along with all your doubts.

And suddenly its all.

. . .GONE.

Comments

[The Milkster]

a bad peice WTF this is amazing it really moved to think about my life. i like poems like that : 3

[Kinado_kun]

I really like this poem and it really touched me in a great way.