.e.m.e.r.g.e.n.c.e.

• Artist: Kuroi Suishou
• Description: From the darkness into the light...
• Date: 01/29/2009
• Tags: emergence poem poetry lyrics darkness

Aloft, the fear that haunted you
Your widened eyes did see
All that hope eluded you
A grave-bound youth to be

Yet all within your sorrow
Had failed to bleed your eyes
Of all remaining tears
Your heart did sterilize

And so you live so free now
Once broken, now repaired
To stretch your tattered wings
And love the life thus spared

Comments

[Lyrix Lightcaster]

Kudos! I'll give that a 5!

[Dragons_rule_the_sky]

its very good. I love the way the words are strung together, it flows really nicely. both the words and the message is(are?) strong

[Kuroi Suishou]

This three stanza poem represents a three-part transition from a dark and depressed world into a brighter one, where the youth is healing their wounds and looking onward with a newfound love in their heart.