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As the sunlight lowers to bed,
The city sheds it's real colors.
The shadows Waltzing under the illumination of moonlight,
Panic,
You think you've seen someone
Heard them calling your name,
But it is only them,
The Demons
Toying with your mind
As they elude you wherever you go,
Watching with emptiness
as you pass by.
Where they gaze,
lies all around us.
Sometimes they sneak up behind
To grab hold and never let go.
Glaring...
Waiting...
- Title: Shadows
- Artist: Fukuruo
- Description: A poem i made last week...nothing special
- Date: 01/26/2009
- Tags: dark shadow
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Atheshya - 07/12/2010
- I'm a bit confused as to why 'Waltzing' and 'Demons' are capitalized. The first three lines are good, and have some interesting imagery, but there's less of that later on. I'm not sure if "Glaring.../Waiting..." is a good way to end it though. I think it'd be more powerful as "Glaring. Waiting.", but that's just a suggestion.
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- Firestar122 - 03/19/2010
- wierd........:l
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- bloodthirstyzay - 01/31/2009
- its really good (:
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- hinata-h15 - 01/26/2009
- I quite like it =3
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