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The church day we met how could I have known
You saw me that first time standing alone
I was new to the crowd and a little bit scared
I needed a friend who really cared
I never thought it would be you who'd come when I was down
I always felt if my life flooded you'd just let me drown
I don't know how it happened,
you were suddenly my best friend
You sat and listened to me talk
My broken heart you tried to mend
You told me about the girl you liked
I told you be patient to look up above
I said to trust God to really pray
You said that you had, so I prayed everyday
I asked God to guide you and help you to see
I told you you could always depend on me
You got what you wanted but she doesn't treat you right
You both argue and she always starts a fight
One day we were talking about something she'd done
I had known I liked you but then it hit me all in one
Suddenly I knew I loved you more than life itself
and I broke down and cried all by myself
When I finally told you you didn't seem surprised
I stood in front of you drying my eyes
I love you more than words can say
I think about you everyday
You are my best friend and I hate to see you cry
I try to hide my feelings believe me Brad, I try
But just know that you'll never spend forever on your own.
Through my tattered tears I still look into your eyes
You give me a look and then started to laugh
I asked you what about,
And you always say, "Life itsef."
I'll never understand why you always flash me a smile,
Tell me you care,
Tell me I'm beautiful,
That you're always there
But when it comes to that day,
You never remember
The way I felt,
The way I stay
Now it's been forever
And I'm still alone
You told me there's someone
But they always answer "No."
Maybe someday
Maybe somehow
Maybe I guess
One of us will come around
Until then,
I'm alone
Still waiting for that one
Who won't say "No."
P.S. If you posted in any of the arenas or have a thread/guild you want me to check out, pm me or just comment it here please! I will visit/comment/rate any time!
- by BlaizeAngel |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 01/17/2009 |
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- Title: Tattered Tears
- Artist: BlaizeAngel
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Description:
I know I have already submitted this one last year in october, but I only got 2 comments.So please comment,rate,and even if you HATE it to DEATH,please still comment and let me know how I can improve my writing and if you do like it,then please let me know and rate it.Thanks for taking the time to reade this description and my poetry.I write alot, so check the areans!Thanks for commenting/rating/reading!
~Steph
- Date: 01/17/2009
- Tags: tattered tears
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Heckova Biker Babe - 09/28/2009
- some of the rhyme sceme is off but the message is well protrayed especially the ending. well done, keep writing
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- 2610harley - 08/29/2009
- Gopod Job. Very emotional
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- BlaizeAngel - 01/17/2009
- thanks! and thanks for commenting!
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- peacefulsword - 01/17/2009
- that was beautiful..and aww inspiring.
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