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Is this how it feels to be in love,
being so tired it's impossible to sleep?
Is this how it feels when your life is given a shove,
thinking you can do anything, that you could take any leap?
Is this how it feels, when you find your destiny,
wanting nothing more than to have it come true?
Is this how it will feel for the rest of eternity,
thinking in your mind there's nothing else you want to do?
Is this feeling how you really feel,
does it exist, is it actually real?
Is it not just a dream,
Is it really happening?
Have I fallen in love, have I found 'the girl?'
The one who completes, who makes up, my world?
After waiting so long, loving every day,
Have I found the girl who takes my breath away?
I find it so very, hard to believe,
She renders me limp, makes my body weave.
Her voice, that of an angel, at times so soft and sweet.
At times it's a voice, that just lifts me off my feet.
Is this how is feels, when your breath is taken away,
Just by those three words you love to hear her say?
Is this how it feels when your heart skips a beat,
When she does something kind, or says something sweet?
I'm not sure if this feeling I have,
whether it is a good thing, or if it is a bad.
One thing I do know, Is I love her more than me,
and that I wish to be with her forever, for all eternity.
Is this how it feels?
I think it is true,
This is how it feels,
To fall in love with you.
- Title: Is This How It Feels?
- Artist: Killvin
- Description: Poem I wrote in school.. it's a rhetorical question... if you comment, please don't answer the questions...
- Date: 01/15/2009
- Tags: feels
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Comments (7 Comments)
- 0o-Kikyon-o0 - 04/16/2009
- <3 lovely ^^
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- DeCrazySheep - 04/03/2009
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Once again, not one for 'love' but this is good.
I like it a little better than the one you posted to Erika.
Very simple ryhmes, but it works, when in a true state of dissbelife most people don't start really deconstructing something untill well after.
I'd bet my bottom dollar that when they set off the A-bomb, some simply wisteled a 'DAMN'.
Then later on they started disscussing the perticulars.
The third stanza I felt was kinda off, but maybe that's just me. - Report As Spam
- star_light07 - 02/19/2009
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Love the poem ^^
You my friend, are a true poet - Report As Spam
- Foxy_Vampiress - 02/04/2009
- My you DO indeed have a gift for writing Killvin. Really impressed. WOW.
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- Emperess_of_the_Night - 01/15/2009
- very awesome. and you say that i do good. that was amazing. i love it. but i'll tell you a secret. I love you way more. i love you killvin, i know that you already know. but i wanted to tell you again any way.
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- Killvin - 01/15/2009
- She already knows how I feel... and this is just an expression of my emotions...
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- Kat Arrow - 01/15/2009
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luv it! heart
oh and if u REALLY do luv her tell her how ya feel
heck i blush ezly 5/5 - Report As Spam