Someone Out There Cares

• Artist: tampico-chan
• Description: A picture goes with this, but my internet is too slow to load it. but it's a little girl with her eyes gouged out. That's what the poem means, she couldn't stand to see so she blinded herself.
• Date: 01/05/2009
• Tags: someone cares hurt pain w00t

Sick of life she grabs a knife
Can't stand to see the strife
One fast gouge and then one other
Ensures she doesn't have to see the suffer
This is the last time she'll ever cry
Cross her heart needle in her eye
Blood running down her cheeks
Leaves pain-red stained streaks
That show how much she hurts for you
But she doesn't know what she can do
She cries a flood
Of her blood
One last time
Just to remind
~*Someone out there CaReS*~

Comments

[MJgwarrocker66]

Very dark. deffinately 5/5. I could feel how the girl was suffering and how she couldn't stand seeing the cold, cruel world.

[2late2live4ever]

w00t

[Nikki4815]

OMG!!! BTW, this is HermioneGranger1212. I saw your thread ^^ could you rate me??

[Sid the Body Gaurd]

so many people finde this to be a reason to just kill themselvs but she lives on. not out of defience but to use her very face to send a profound massage to a world she cares about.

[mixlemaxle]

5/5 i love it!!!!!
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[XxBLOOD_JAYxX]

Absolutely amazing, well detailed and very powerful. 5/5 because it was one of the best that i read so far.