u could say that it's my life

• Artist: Ace Kozuki Kallen
• Description: The snow falling
  is the trouble.
  i can't do outside chores
  for i'm a clutz.
  my dad well yell and shout
  cause i won't do anything to help.
  i do more than him,
  for he is a control freak,
  and does nothing,
  he acts like he's two,
  and tells me to do everything,
  that he can't be bothered to do.
• Date: 01/03/2009
• Tags: lymaru life

hope you enjoy

Comments

[Emmizine]

Um, I think you put the poem in the wrong place... the poems Ok though. You could try really trying to make the reader feel something, because this sounds more like something for your journal

[SquishyTobi]

Your supposed to put that poem up there and that hope you enjoy down there...
good job though...
work on grabbing attention...
3/5