The Order

• Artist: Kitara Mansen
• Description: I was tired of some poems that make no sense. I mean, yes, poems express your feelings and don't need to have any order. But come on, at least follow this simple step mentioned in the poem. See if you can figure out the step.
• Date: 12/29/2008
• Tags: order

Some people find it funny to start a poem wrong.
Tis a shame to see this done.
Anyone who does this doesn’t deserve to write.
Retarded and stupid it is,
To see someone start with the end.

Many think poems shouldn’t follow any order.
I think they all have to start somewhere.
Don’t they realize that everything must have a start?
Don’t they realize that everything must have an end?
Like those from the past, they ignore this.
Everything is ruined by this rule.

Everything needs some kind of order.
No rules would make everything a ruin.
Doesn’t anyone see the order?

Comments

[Raszra]

Backwards, very authentic indeed! ^_^

[Kitara Mansen]

I know nothing about you, yet you want to be friends? This is quite the dilemma. I'll have to think about it (AKA, I'll laze about for a few hours and then do it.)

[jermella11]

can you be my friend my user name is jermella11